Friday, 24 October 2014
Grace 100WC Week 8
100WC Week 8
The ball whizzed into the cold dark forest as Molly,Sam,Max and I were playing baseball.
''BANG,'' as it struck something stone like.
I ran into the forest to see what it was. I could see nothing except a cold looking,dark statue.
there it was my baseball perched right next to the statue. Then i thought to myself, ''Why is a statue like this doing here?''
The way its arms were crossed in front of its body made me afraid that it was alive. Right then, right at that moment a hand grabbed my arm tightly. I couldn't move at all due to my frighted state.
I opened my eyes to see you mum standing there beside my bed then I remembered that it was all a dream.
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Good job Grace
ReplyDeleteI did not get a part. Where it says Right then,right at that moment I didn't really get it. Where it says I opened my eyes to see you mum standing there and the rest of it needed speech marks.
Other than those things it was a really good story and I liked it.