Friday, 25 October 2013

Grace's 100 Word Challenge - The Night Zoo


                                   Halloween !!!

On Halloween I was out trick or treating when this creature started jolting towards me. I saw black licorice like fur, pink splintery teeth ,claws as sharp as knives, ears with fangs and bright yellow eyes. As it got closer it started to float then scream and laugh. Suddenly three more clamored towards me. I attempted to run I couldn't because I was glued to a piece of chewing gum. The next minute I was asleep in a cage made of candy canes. I tried to escape I was about to eat it when ...
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2 comments:

  1. Trish27 October 2013 at 03:46

    A very creative 100WC, Grace. Your description of the creature is good, particularly the 'licorice-like fur' and the 'splintery teeth'. Well done!

    Trish Burgess (Team 100WC)

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  2. Anonymous12 November 2013 at 17:14

    Hi

    Great story Grace i like how you put a lot of discriptive word in your story.

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